The Fight for Honey
Once
upon a time there lived Jinhong and Shihong. They two are best friends. Jinhong
is a master of noodle, and Shihong is a master of rice. Jinhong has a jar of
honey and the honey is a precious thing that he gained when he was young, and
it is a honey that comes from great grandfather to grandfather, grandfather to
father and from father to Jinhong, so he kept the honey jar well. Shihong
wanted to have one spoon of honey, but Jinhong didn’t let him to have one
spoon, because it is his precious delicious honey, Jinhong wanted to have the
honey by himself. Shihong got angry to Jinhong that he didn’t even gave Shihong
one spoon, so Shihong hide the honey jar from Jinhong when Jinhong was in the bathroom
showering. When Jinhong found out that his jar was disappeared, he realized
that Shihong took his jar and got mad at Shihong. Jinhong used his noodle power
and trapped Shihong. Shihong was very happy that Jinhong was mad at him.
Jinhong and Shihong’s friendship crashed, now there was no such thing like
friendship in Jinhong’s mind, there was only revenge, and honey jar in his
mind. Shihong used rice power and got free from Jinhong’s trap, and got a lot of
damage. Shihong also went crazy.
I laughed a lot while reading your three endings. Some critics could say that they are ridiculous, but I think they were so hilarious that I felt as if I were watching a comedy movie :). However, you need to be specific in elaborating each scene in your story. For example, why did Shihong got injured after he got free of Jinhong's trap? Is it because Jinhong attacked or tortured Shihong using his noddle power? Anyway, I really enjoyed your story:)
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